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PostSubject: Re: Chapter The Last: Epilogue: Resurrection   Chapter The Last: Epilogue: Resurrection - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeMon Aug 30, 2010 10:18 am

Megan’s body drifted downstream.

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PostSubject: Re: Chapter The Last: Epilogue: Resurrection   Chapter The Last: Epilogue: Resurrection - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeTue Aug 31, 2010 6:46 am

It's kind of disgusting to see a rotting corpse polluting the water....
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter The Last: Epilogue: Resurrection   Chapter The Last: Epilogue: Resurrection - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeTue Aug 31, 2010 10:18 am

>.>

It can't be rotting, it combusted entirely. (Dye burnt Megan to ash, remember? Oops, sorry Megan).

Mebbe it's a spiritual body? :3

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PostSubject: Re: Chapter The Last: Epilogue: Resurrection   Chapter The Last: Epilogue: Resurrection - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeTue Aug 31, 2010 10:29 am

Lol. Besides, how can a body pollute the water? Anything left feeds our ecosystem, keeping the circle of life going. What's left becomes a skelly. Black skelly if it got burned...

Megan wasn't turned to ashes, she just had her skin and most her flesh burnt away. Priest tried to heal her, but she was already dead. If he had hope for her, meant something was left. And now it's washed away Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Chapter The Last: Epilogue: Resurrection   Chapter The Last: Epilogue: Resurrection - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeTue Aug 31, 2010 12:10 pm

Hope is not power. Belief in its existence is.

I thought that this chapter wasn't exactly your best, but then again, I am a person who likes activity, so these types of passages don't interest me much.

I did like the scene of the rebirthing though, how you described the fire forming the new Dye, and then leaving him... almost. Very nice detail.
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter The Last: Epilogue: Resurrection   Chapter The Last: Epilogue: Resurrection - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeThu Sep 02, 2010 11:51 am

Red Blizzard wrote:
Megan wasn't turned to ashes, she just had her skin and most her flesh burnt away.

Which brings us back to the rotting corpse :3
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter The Last: Epilogue: Resurrection   Chapter The Last: Epilogue: Resurrection - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeSun Sep 12, 2010 12:42 am

Lizargeco wrote:
Hope is not power. Belief in its existence is.

I thought that this chapter wasn't exactly your best, but then again, I am a person who likes activity, so these types of passages don't interest me much.

I did like the scene of the rebirthing though, how you described the fire forming the new Dye, and then leaving him... almost. Very nice detail.

This is off topic but...whenever i hear you speak... It's always in a deep voice. I mean deeper than darth vader. ._.

on topic...I can't wait for the next one.

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It'll take a while for me to write the next prologue. I've got stuff going on :/ But It's gonna be epic. I can promise you that.

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mind if you tell me which time period your going to be writing this in?

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3 weeks after the end of this chapter Wink

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Well, can I take part in it?

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PostSubject: Re: Chapter The Last: Epilogue: Resurrection   Chapter The Last: Epilogue: Resurrection - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeTue Sep 14, 2010 12:53 am

I don't see why not. I'm extending it to 3 months, just realized that Wa-Kia would take a bit longer to rebuild and some other characters will need more time to change...

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