Chapter The Last: Epilogue: Resurrection

Megan’s body drifted downstream.

Thanks Red /\

It's kind of disgusting to see a rotting corpse polluting the water....

>.>

It can't be rotting, it combusted entirely. (Dye burnt Megan to ash, remember? Oops, sorry Megan).

Mebbe it's a spiritual body? :3

Lol. Besides, how can a body pollute the water? Anything left feeds our ecosystem, keeping the circle of life going. What's left becomes a skelly. Black skelly if it got burned...

Megan wasn't turned to ashes, she just had her skin and most her flesh burnt away. Priest tried to heal her, but she was already dead. If he had hope for her, meant something was left. And now it's washed away

Hope is not power. Belief in its existence is.

I thought that this chapter wasn't exactly your best, but then again, I am a person who likes activity, so these types of passages don't interest me much.

I did like the scene of the rebirthing though, how you described the fire forming the new Dye, and then leaving him... almost. Very nice detail.

Red Blizzard wrote:

Megan wasn't turned to ashes, she just had her skin and most her flesh burnt away.

Which brings us back to the rotting corpse :3

Lizargeco wrote:

Hope is not power. Belief in its existence is.

I thought that this chapter wasn't exactly your best, but then again, I am a person who likes activity, so these types of passages don't interest me much.

I did like the scene of the rebirthing though, how you described the fire forming the new Dye, and then leaving him... almost. Very nice detail.

This is off topic but...whenever i hear you speak... It's always in a deep voice. I mean deeper than darth vader. ._.

on topic...I can't wait for the next one.

It'll take a while for me to write the next prologue. I've got stuff going on :/ But It's gonna be epic. I can promise you that.

mind if you tell me which time period your going to be writing this in?

3 weeks after the end of this chapter

Well, can I take part in it?

I don't see why not. I'm extending it to 3 months, just realized that Wa-Kia would take a bit longer to rebuild and some other characters will need more time to change...